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Wednesday, March 25, 2015
Framed Found Poem
I like to think of choosing guava's as choosing life's choices. First you investigate. You choose a guava but it's not quite ripe. You can tell by the dark green skin. Knowing you shouldn't waste time investigating any further you smell it, imagining a pale pink center, the seeds tightly embedded in the flesh. You pick up a ripe guava. It's yellow with a pink tinge. The skin is thick , firm, sweet. It's heart is bright pink and almost solid with seeds. At this time any other person would choose the ripe guava the better choice. But because of who I am curiosity gets the best of me and I would take a bite out of the guava. I would bite into the unriped guava my teeth would grip the dark green surface and would sink into the pale pink center. Not knowing how to eat a guava the seeds end up in the cervices between my teeth. As if I was surprised. If you let curiosity get the best of you you suffer the consequences.
Wednesday, March 4, 2015
MLA CITATION
The Host
The Host by Stephanie Meyer is a romance novel based around Melanie, Wanderer, The Seeker and Melanie's love interest Jared. Everything comes crashing down once the earth is invaded by parasitic aliens otherwise referred to as "souls". The novel follows one aliens predicament when its host's consciousness refuses to co-operate with the alien. This alien's name is Wanderer and The Seeker (the villain in this story) sends her on a mission to recover the rest of the humans. She earned her name because she lived on nine planets before coming to earth and being implanted in Melanie. Most of Melanie's memories are of her younger brother and boyfriend. Seeing these memories Wanderer has always lacked love in her life and latches on to the memories as well as Melanie. Throughout the book Wanderer starts to love each and every one of them and will become emotionally attached in the best way possible. But will The Seeker stand for such betrayal from one of her own?
Melanie was a teenage rebel who constantly rebelled against the aliens trying to obtain complete freedom. While going on a mission Melanie gets chased out of a window where she falls in a fountain and goes unconscious. She wakes up the next day to find that the parasite was already implanted in her. As soon as Wanderer is implanted in Melanie the first thing she encounters in Melanie's memories. Wanderer tries to search her memories to find information regarding "wild humans"(humans who haven't yet been implanted) but they had appeared to be blocked. Wanderer confused by this continued to get familiar with her new body and found out that she couldn't access the memories because Melanie was still alive and was protecting them.
Wanderer soon tries to fight back but stops after Melanie starts threatening her. Wanderer starts to love Jared and Melanie's younger brother Jamie like their her own family. She quickly starts to sympathize with the humans. This causes her to completely abandon her original mission and species to become an allie with not only Melanie but with the humans in general. Through each chapter you realize Wanderer cant tell which of the feelings going on in Melanie's body are hers. They each become a big part of each other almost like sisters.
Once Melanie has built a relationship with Wanderer and knows she can trust her she convinces Wanderer to run away from The Seeker to go and find Jared and Jamie. They drive to Phoenix to find her Uncle Jeb's bomb shelter in the middle of the desert. Once they get to a certain point when they can no longer drive they begin to walk. Being the fact that Melanie can handle harsh weather conditions but Wanderer can't they have a hard time coping with each other. Eventually they run out of water and think they are going to die. Of course we have all read that book that has the most unrealistic situation ever and sadfully this is one of those. At the nick of time Uncle Jeb and his team of survivors find Melanie's body but want to kill it because its not really her. They take her back to the shelter where her brother and Jared cant decide what to do with her so they put her in a storage closet and feed her bread. Two of the residents of the shelter (Kyle and Ian) want wanderer dead but soon Jeb comes and saves her by threatening the boys.
Uncle Jeb gives her a better place to reside (in the living quarters of Jamie and Jared) which Wanderer doesn't quite like but Melanie is ecstatic about. Once wanderer and Melanie start to interact with the community Uncle Jeb and others start to see that she is different from other "souls". She starts doing chores in the cafeteria and gets to know the camp members especially Ian. They soon began to talk , Melanie doesn't like where that was going. Ian and Wanderer fell in love and started to spend time together. The camp figures out that Melanie is still alive inside and to confirm it Jared kisses her. Melanie goes to the hot springs to take a bath alone when suddenly Kyle tries to kill her. The ground starts to give out so Wanderer runs away but felt guilty leaving Kyle so she goes and saves him. Everyone asked what happened so she lied saying she fell but Ian knew that was a lie and attacked Kyle. Wanderer stops this. Kyle is confused on why Wanderer was still so kind after what he did. A guy with cancer calls for Wanderer asking her to get medicine because he was sick. Once she gets it the camp knows they can trust her and let her go on raids. She simply walks in the store and walks out with whatever food she wants. Wanderer wants to be extracted from Melanie's body so she gives him a step by step tutorial.
The doctor asks if she is sure about this and she agrees. Her and Melanie have a heartwarming goodbye and then the doctor puts Melanie to sleep and extracts Wanderer. Even though she was extracted Wanda woke up in a new body. Melanie explained she couldn't let her die and Ian told her that he held her soul and she was beautiful. They all go on another raid to find other humans and "souls" coexisting among each other. One of the other souls asks Wanderer ,"Its a strange world isn't it". The Host shows that love and a strong will can help you overcome anything even a parasitic alien apocalypse.
Meyer, Stephanie; The Host: United States; Little, Brown and Company; 2008
Thursday, January 22, 2015
The Beach
Amazing memories, family, and fun are three things that come to mind when I hear someone say the word beach. Although the beach may not be the most common place to hold dear to your heart for my family this is a big oasis to escape all of our troubles in life. We walk here when our troubles overwhelm us, we have serious and emotional conversations , and we just go here to have fun playing volleyball or body board. The beach is warm and breezy and a place for making memories and telling corny jokes around a bonfire pit . All in all this place brings out our inner peace.
If your not the type of person to enjoy the beach you may wonder why I describe it the way I do. I mean when a normal person thinks of the beach they think the usual sand, water and lots and lots of people. Now this image isn't wrong but its so much more than that. I spent most of my vacation at sycamore cove. At this beach there's a mini cave where me and my family chill and tell stories, a beautiful ocean with waves perfect for surfing or body boarding, a widespread area full of golden brown sand that we lay and sunbathe on. Me and my family see the ocean as a big blue mother their to protect us and I must admit there's no place I rather be than the beach.
If your not the type of person to enjoy the beach you may wonder why I describe it the way I do. I mean when a normal person thinks of the beach they think the usual sand, water and lots and lots of people. Now this image isn't wrong but its so much more than that. I spent most of my vacation at sycamore cove. At this beach there's a mini cave where me and my family chill and tell stories, a beautiful ocean with waves perfect for surfing or body boarding, a widespread area full of golden brown sand that we lay and sunbathe on. Me and my family see the ocean as a big blue mother their to protect us and I must admit there's no place I rather be than the beach.
Last Chance To Pass
The selections "An American Story" by Anthony Lewis and "Hunger of Memory" by Richard Rodriguez both convey a similar theme . Each selection describes the hardships of immigrants when trying to reach the United States or cope with the different people and surroundings of the United States. In An American Story you follow a family of boat people who take a journey to the United States. In Hunger of Memory a family is already in the United States but struggle with obstacles such as learning English and communicating with "los gringos."
An American story is about a family in Vietnam trying to make their way to the United States. The family wanted to escape Vietnam because the communist took over. They then left Vietnam on a small fishing boat with no more than two hundred dollars in which they needed to spend on used winter coats. Their were nine members of the family but only seven left together a ten year old boy , his four sisters, and his brother. As you can see this family has already had to overcome several obstacles such as leave home and leave behind family but that's not all they would have to face.
Hunger of Memory is about a Spanish speaking family living in America. This family struggled with interacting with other people because their English wasn't as fluent as the "los Americanos" or "los gringos". A little boy is greatly affected by this because every time he hears Spanish it reminds him of a home he once lived in before moving to the United States. The family copes the best way they can but the boy realizes he's different from everyone else. Because of the fact that most people around him speaks English he assumes that Spanish is a language that only his family speaks.
When you analyze both selections you can easily see how they compare and how they contrast. Both selections are about immigrants. I could keep pointing out the obvious but lets dig just a little bit deeper. Both families sacrificed in order to move to America. For example, in An American Story the author stated, "Two members of the family were left in Vietnam: Viet Dinh's father, Phong Dinh, and his older sister Van Dinh, who was twenty then." (Lewis page 153). This shows how dedicated this family was to moving to the United States.
Although both stories have their comparisons they contrast in many ways. An American Story was told in third person while Hunger of Memory was told in first person. Words like "they" "he" and "she were used numerous times in An American Story (Lewis 153). In Hunger of Memory the narrator referred to himself as "I" which right their gives the point of view away in this selection (Rodriguez page 160). Both selections were written about two different places Vietnam and a Spanish speaking country.
Rodriguez and Lewis show how hard it is to leave home and adapt to new people and surroundings. In fact for some people it's kind of a new start or clean slate. Rodriguez conveyed how he stayed isolated from others because of his lack of fluent English while Lewis tells a story of a family escaping a bad situation to a better one. All in all both selections show that its hard to just up and leave and start a new life . In my opinion these selections really open your eyes to the hardships faced by immigrants.
An American story is about a family in Vietnam trying to make their way to the United States. The family wanted to escape Vietnam because the communist took over. They then left Vietnam on a small fishing boat with no more than two hundred dollars in which they needed to spend on used winter coats. Their were nine members of the family but only seven left together a ten year old boy , his four sisters, and his brother. As you can see this family has already had to overcome several obstacles such as leave home and leave behind family but that's not all they would have to face.
Hunger of Memory is about a Spanish speaking family living in America. This family struggled with interacting with other people because their English wasn't as fluent as the "los Americanos" or "los gringos". A little boy is greatly affected by this because every time he hears Spanish it reminds him of a home he once lived in before moving to the United States. The family copes the best way they can but the boy realizes he's different from everyone else. Because of the fact that most people around him speaks English he assumes that Spanish is a language that only his family speaks.
When you analyze both selections you can easily see how they compare and how they contrast. Both selections are about immigrants. I could keep pointing out the obvious but lets dig just a little bit deeper. Both families sacrificed in order to move to America. For example, in An American Story the author stated, "Two members of the family were left in Vietnam: Viet Dinh's father, Phong Dinh, and his older sister Van Dinh, who was twenty then." (Lewis page 153). This shows how dedicated this family was to moving to the United States.
Although both stories have their comparisons they contrast in many ways. An American Story was told in third person while Hunger of Memory was told in first person. Words like "they" "he" and "she were used numerous times in An American Story (Lewis 153). In Hunger of Memory the narrator referred to himself as "I" which right their gives the point of view away in this selection (Rodriguez page 160). Both selections were written about two different places Vietnam and a Spanish speaking country.
Rodriguez and Lewis show how hard it is to leave home and adapt to new people and surroundings. In fact for some people it's kind of a new start or clean slate. Rodriguez conveyed how he stayed isolated from others because of his lack of fluent English while Lewis tells a story of a family escaping a bad situation to a better one. All in all both selections show that its hard to just up and leave and start a new life . In my opinion these selections really open your eyes to the hardships faced by immigrants.
Wednesday, November 12, 2014
THE ASSASSINATION OF JFK
The Assassination Of John F Kennedy
I just read two sources that describe the assassination of President John Kennedy. One source was a primary source the other was secondary. Although these two sources are talking about the same thing the perspective is different. "A Warm Clear Day In Dallas", is told by a person who didn't witness it or see it firsthand. On the other hand , "Address to Congress" was a speech spoken by vice president Lyndon B. Johnson who was more close to the president making it a primary source.
"A Clear Day In Dallas", focuses more on telling the story of how it all happened. It really emphasizes how it was a normal day until the shooting of the president. Lyndon B Johnson's speech was written once the president was already dead and came more from the heart. This speech talks more about JFK's legacy and how we need to continue what he started when it comes to the nation in general.
The purpose of "A Clear Day In Dallas", was to inform the reader of the events that led to the killing of John F Kennedy. Lyndon B Johnson's speech wasn't to inform the readers of the events of what happened but to inform the reader on how they would feel or react to the situation that already happened. As you can see the purpose of these sources are mainly different.
Although the point of view of these two sources are different both could be great to research Kennedy's death. I feel this way because A Clear Day In Dallas tells you the when, where, who, and how but Lyndon B Johnsons speech lets you know how greatly affected everyone was and still is by the president's death.
These two sources touch a sensitive situation that still is in our hearts today. The death of JFK was both abrupt and uncalled for. Both of these sources clearly state that.
Tuesday, November 4, 2014
ELA WRITING ASSESMENT
ELA WRITING ASSESMENT
An organization called the Digital Youth Project conducted a study on how social network , video sharing sites , and electronic devices have greatly effected the lives of youth culture. They interviewed over 800 youth and young adults to configure how much the media was being used . Various people were involved in the conduction of this widespread study.Many adults worry that children waste their time doing things such as playing games or texting. This organization found that to somewhat be true but instead of focusing completely on the downsides on the downsides of social network (texting, etc.) they decided to look at the Brightside. For example, the Digital Youth Project stated this , "The digital world is creating new opportunities for youth to grapple with social norms, explore new interests, develop technical skills, and experiment with new forms of self expression ."
The Digital Youth Project's point of view has shined a positive light on new technology. These authors have even came up with two categories for people's motives when on the internet. The two categories are Friendship and Interest driven online media use. This is quite brilliant considering that most people use the internet to either gain friends or explore interests.
When you really analyze the summary of the Digital Youth Project's findings you see how they've really taken the use of social media and its affect on teens and broke it down to a simple form. Not only did they point out the bad they pointed out the good which in my opinion is very rare. Lots of people look down upon the use of technology or they say its taking over our lives but the Digital Youth Project disregarded that and said you know what lets do something different.
Technology has also affected how we learn. Their are already schools using Ipad's as books as well as a note taking tool. So my big question is technology helping us or hurting us or will it start to take over our lives?
A LITTLE BIT ABOUT ME
Autobiography
I'm not much of a writer but here goes nothing. My name is Anonda Hellems and I'm 14 years old. I was born in Des Moines ,Iowa on January 10, 2000. I have 4 siblings 1 sister and 3 brothers. It was cool having other brothers and sisters but they would tease me because I was the youngest. When I was younger I was quiet and stayed to myself. I know hard to believe right?
In kindergarten I was bullied because all of the other girls thought I was a spoiled brat which may I say wasn't the case but we all know haters will continue to hate. So once I got to first grade I was put in private school. At first I hated it but it gave me a chance to meet people who could take me places in life and excel to my full potential. One in particular I still remember to this day , Marcey Briggings. Me and Marcey lived in the nicer part of Iowa so we would always go places and travel with each other until one day she moved. From that point on she helped me kind of interact will people more often.
Years passed and before I knew it I was in fifth grade. I had finally blossomed into basically who I am today a outspoken , independent, and ambitious individual. Ive always had good grades because I had no choice. It was do good or be on punishment until I was old enough to have kids. So you know what ? I worked my but off. Los Angeles was a thought but I didn't think my mom would follow through.
This thought faded away and before you knew it I was in my beautiful dress for my 8th grade graduation. That was one of my greatest memories everyone cheering for me congratulating me just the atmosphere was positive. For most of the time it stayed positive until my mom announced that we were moving to Los Angeles. My heart dropped all I could think about is how quickly that situation escalated. A situation like this just proves how your life can take a dramatic turn in less than a minute.
Soon we were on a airplane and Iowa , my home was so far away I could barely see it. When we arrived in Los Angeles immediately everything was different. It was so fast pace everyone was in a rush. Believe it or not their's one main freeway that everyone uses and their was nearly never traffic but here was a complete different story .
My mom gravitated towards Park La Brea because it was in a decent location. We soon met a rental agent and found the place right for us . All of our stuff was moved in by movers and I started to face reality. Oh but it got worse I came to a deep dark place called Fairfax High School. The first day was a fail . Every time I greeted someone they looked at me like I just committed murder. I may be weird or annoying or really smart but its all apart of who I am so if you cant accept that you cant accept me.
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